a small oval lake deep in trees and rocks and wild grass, like a drop of dew caught in a curled leaf.
Showing posts with label analogy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label analogy. Show all posts
Sunday, March 6, 2011
The Lady in the Lake, p. 542 (2)
Saturday, October 17, 2009
Farewell, My Lovely, 251
At the end he thought and then spoke slowly and what he said had wisps of fog clinging to it, like the beads on a mustache. Maybe that made it seem wiser than it was, maybe not.
Friday, October 16, 2009
"Bay City Blues," p. 241 (from Killer in the Rain, 2nd printing)
The road twisted, dipped, soared along the flank of the foothills, a scatter of lights to the northwest and a carpet of them to the south. The three piers seemed remote from this point, thin pencils of light laid out on a pad of black velvet.
Thursday, October 15, 2009
"Bay City Blues," p. 242 (from Killer in the Rain, 2nd printing)
The lobby--they called it a foyer--looked like an MGM set for a night club in the Broadway Melody of 1980.
"Bay City Blues," p. 264 (from Killer in the Rain, 2nd printing)
It was cold up their in the hills, but the air was clear and the stars were like pieces of polished chromium.
Wednesday, October 14, 2009
"Bay City Blues," p. 278 (from Killer in the Rain, 2nd printing)
It looked like somebody was going to open up the Austrian Case wide enough for the mayor to think it was a new boulevard and come out with a bunch of flowers and make a speech.
(sounds like some other mayor I know, eh?)
Saturday, February 21, 2009
The Notebooks of Raymond Chandler, p. 69
You can't make good pictures without good screenplays, and you can't get good screenplays from people who do not know how to write them, technically speaking, but have been debauched and spoiled by Hollywood to such an extent that technique is all they have left. Technique alone is never enough. You have to have passion. Technique alone is just an embroidered pot holder.
Thursday, February 19, 2009
The Notebooks of Raymond Chandler, p. 29
"Would you convey my compliments to the purist who reads your proofs and tell him or her that I write a sort of broken-down patois which is something like the way a Swiss waiter talks, and that when I split an infinitive, God damn it, I split it so it will stay split, and when I interrupt the velvety smoothness of my more or less literate syntax with a few sudden words of bar-room vernacular, that is done with the eyes wide open and the mind relaxed but attentive."
There's also a really great poem that follows this that is totally worth reading, worth copying, worth hanging up in your room. Really, it's great. Go read it! It's too long for me to type up here.
Saturday, January 17, 2009
Farewell, My Lovely, 242
Farewell, My Lovely, 160 & 164
'Listen, Hemingway, don't repeat everything I say,' I said. ...
'A gag,' I said, 'An old, old gag.'
'Who is this Hemingway person at all?'
'A guy that keeps saying the same thing over and over until you begin to believe it must be good.'
Monday, December 15, 2008
The Lady in the Lake, ?
Friday, October 17, 2008
Farewell, My Lovey, ? (somewhere near the beginning)
Even on Central Avenue, not the quietest dressed street in the world, he looked about as inconspicuous as a tarantula on a slice of angel food.
Labels:
analogy,
Central Avenue,
clothing,
metaphor,
spider
The High Window, ?
Out of the apartment houses come women who should be young but have faces like stale beer; men with pulled-down hats and quick eyes that look the street over behind the cupped hand that shields the match flame; worn intellectuals with cigarette coughs and no money in the bank; fly cops with granite faces and unwavering eyes; cokies and coke peddlers; people who look like nothing in particular and know it, and once in a while even men that actually go to work. But they come out early, when the wide cracked sidewalks are empty and still have dew on them.
Labels:
analogy,
apartments,
cigarettes,
cops,
downtown,
drugs,
hats,
metaphor,
sidewalks,
women
Saturday, September 6, 2008
The Long Goodbye, p. 359 (Penguin Crime Fiction UK)
Friday, September 5, 2008
The Little Sister, p.?
The Little Sister, p.?
I smelled Los Angeles before I got to it. It smelled stale and old like a living room that had been closed too long. But the coloured lights fooled you. The lights were wonderful.
Labels:
analogy,
lights,
living room,
Los Angeles,
metaphor,
smell
Poodle Springs, p. 27 (Berkley Mystery)
I could hear the hum of the air conditioner somewhere out of sight, like a locust behind the building.
I pushed through it into the suddenly cool indoors. It felt good after the hard desert heat, but it felt artificial too, like the soothing touch of an embalmer.
Labels:
air conditioning,
analogy,
artificial,
desert,
heat,
metaphor
Trouble is My Business, p. 180 (Vintage Crime)
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